Friday, February 27, 2015


   Literary essay

 Based on Wonder by rj palico
(picture of the book)

                   


 -jlo
                                                                     
 The only way you can accomplish(a person accomplishing somthing) in life is to love yourself when you have love  you can do anything.some important ideas are overcoming differences  and making memories(memories). throughout the story( a person reading) we hear about August life and his greatest adventure yet school(a school) friendships rivalries( friends and enemies) and heart breaks(broken heart) this story is truly amazing even through the death(a grave) of the one thing that augast thinks overlooks his face and love him.  But the truth is people love him he just needs to find out.  I think(a person thinking) throughout the story August starts school this year. and throughout the year kids start to change there opinion about August and he also thinks about himself different I think that the important idea is you have to learn to love yourself(a heart).(6



In the beginning he starts out saying " I am not a ordinary ten year old boy yes I do ordinary things like i eat ice cream i ride my bike I play catch and play my Xbox"(a kid riding a bike). This shows that in the beginning what he thinks of himself he refers to himself as not an ordinary boy he literally knows this because ordinary kids do not make ordinary kids run away( kids running).  This supports my claim because he has to learn to love himself this is at the begging where he hates his deformity(a kid with a deformity) and hates himself for having it. When I first read this i immediately knew there was something wrong with his body. and one more clue to that he does not love himself. (5)



Earlier in the story on page 43 he tries so hard to not get noticed and even raise his head up from his desk( a shy kid) just so kids in his mind he thinks how can I love myself if other kids hate me call me the freak.  But the truth is for anyone to have others even like you you have to like yourself.  He does not know it but other kids do like him Christopher and summer like August and his family loves him(a  family).  He does not see it that way and so until August truly knows they love him he will never be able to love himself.  This was starting to happen but then a  huge set back  jack will said in front of august that he did not like august in fact said "if i looked like that I would kill myself "(MEAN KIDS)this made august not just not love himself but at this point he hates himself. (5)



On page 165 to 167 August and jack are most likely texting and became friends over jack punching Julian(a kid puching a kid) . Jack did not mean what he said he did not realize(relizing) that when he said it ,but he realized after.  This skyrockets(a rocket) August feelings and at this point he lies himself but Julian had turn the whole 6 grade boys against him so they all hated him(more mean kids).  For a normal kid I would think it was terrible but to August having one true friend is amazing.  The part that I really think August learned to love  himself was the nature(animals) retreat as he was getting bullied Amos miles and Henry came out and helped him they had everybody forget about the war(a war.)  And the day August went to school without anyone snickering at him he realized that people loved him. an example of this is at the end his mom says “you really are wonder Auggie you are wonder” this shows they loved him and he loved them back finally August learned to love himself(heart). (6)

can not look at him. (5)



My conclusion is when I think of myself in real life I could never overcome(a wall) what agust did. It is amazing what aguast can overcome with the power of one persons love people can do anything. Aguast overcame his differences  toke insults(a picture of insults) from bullies a whole grade hating him. He went through all of this just to find out something he already knew .he realizes he is loved and he thinks of himself as wonder. (5)(a boy wondering)

Wednesday, February 25, 2015

at school today I brought a pack of gum and at my school gum is like money people will do so much to get their hands on even a fraction of a piece.  so as I pulled out a piece it was if the whole world stopped in my class. anyone in the cold classroom knew the first to me would have the best chance to get a piece then crashing threw the  wall came lowery kids burdick kids and even korman kids and the battle started.  One of my friends on the burdock team lead me to a safe house near the eng tech room and he pulls a straw on me locked and loaded with wet balls of paper ready to go striate throw the targets body. I quickly draw with my straw and shoot.  I am lucky to survive then I over hear a conversation the rumor that I had gum had spread the kids who where in eng tech put a bounty on me. it stated.

"anyone who catches luke boeson and takes the pack of gum and puts it in the eng tech room for the seventh grade braisted homeroom will be rewarded with 50$" this was put over the inter come I knew I had to leave.

I had to get to tech services and the monitor room behind the media center to see an escape route but the media center would be crawling with harry potter nerds and ferensacaters so using my prior knowledge I new I could get through mr boodle room in the 3/4 hallway to mrs spencers room.  and I could run to the room with only encountering about one kid.  So I did I was lucky not to get fought as I monitored the school I noticed battles in the gym and luck room I watched in horror as whirling balls of spit flew across the room and bodies lying dead on the ground.

Thursday, February 12, 2015

the gum war part one

at school today I brought a pack of gum and at my school gum is like money people will do so much to get their hands on even a fraction of a piece.  so as I pulled out a piece it was if the whole world stopped in my class. anyone in the cold classroom knew the first to me would have the best chance to get a piece then crashing threw the  wall came lowery kids burdick kids and even korman kids and the battle started.  One of my friends on the burdock team lead me to a safe house near the eng tech room and he pulls a straw on me locked and loaded with wet balls of paper ready to go striate throw the targets body. I quickly draw with my straw and shoot.  I am lucky to survive then I over hear a conversation the rumor that I had gum had spread the kids who where in eng tech put a bounty on me. it stated.

"anyone who catches luke boeson and takes the pack of gum and puts it in the eng tech room for the seventh grade braisted homeroom will be rewarded with 50$" this was put over the inter come I knew I had to leave.

Sunday, February 8, 2015

the contest

mr joseph is making us enter a contest about black history month we should not be forced to enter a contest we do it if we want to and so this is making me pretty angry I mean imagine a teacher that  every contest he heres about he has us enter it is terrible I hope you understand my pain.

Friday, February 6, 2015


Literary essay

 Based on Wonder by rj palico

                       


 -jlo

 The only way you can accomplish in life is to love yourself when you have love  you can do anything.some important ideas are overcoming differences and making memories. throughout the story we hear about August life and his greatest adventure yet school friendships rivalries and heart breaks this story is truly amazing even through the death of the one thing that augast thinks overlooks his face and love him.  But the truth is people love him he just needs to find out.  I think throughout the story August starts school this year. and throughout the year kids start to change there opinion about August and he also thinks about himself different I think that the important idea is you have to learn to love yourself.(6)



In the beginning he starts out saying " I am not a ordinary ten year old boy yes I do ordinary things like i eat ice cream i ride my bike I play catch and play my Xbox". This shows that in the beginning what he thinks of himself he refers to himself as not an ordinary boy he literally knows this because ordinary kids do not make ordinary kids run away.  This supports my claim because he has to learn to love himself this is at the begging where he hates his deformity and hates himself for having it. When I first read this i immediately knew there was something wrong with his body. and one more clue to that he does not love himself. (5)



Earlier in the story on page 43 he tries so hard to not get noticed and even raise his head up from his desk just so kids in his mind he thinks how can I love myself if other kids hate me call me the freak.  But the truth is for anyone to have others even like you you have to like yourself.  He does not know it but other kids do like him Christopher and summer like August and his family loves him.  He does not see it that way and so until August truly knows they love him he will never be able to love himself.  This was starting to happen but then a  huge set back  emerged jack will said in front of august that he did not like august in fact said "if i looked like that I would kill myself "this made august not just not love himself but at this point he hates himself. (5)



On page 165 to 167 August and jack are most likely texting and because friends over jack punching Julian.  Jack did not mean what he said he did not realize that when he said it but he realized after.  This skyrockets August feelings and at this point he lies himself but Julian had turn the whole 6 grade boys against him so they all hated him.  For a normal kid I would think it was terrible but to August having one true friend is amazing.  The part that I really think August learned to love  himself was the nature retreat as he was getting bullied Amos miles and Henry came out and helped him they had everybody forget about the war.  And the day August went to school without anyone snickering at him he realized that people loved him. an example of this is at the end his mom says “you really are wonder Auggie you are wonder” this shows they loved him and he loved them back finally August learned to love himself. (6)

can not look at him. (5)



My conclusion is when I think of myself in real life I could never overcame what agust did. It is amazing what aguast can overcome with the power of one persons love people can do anything. Aguast overcame his differences  toke insults from bullies a whole grade hating him. He went through all of this just to find out something he already knew .he realizes he is loved and he thinks of himself as wonder. (5)

Thursday, February 5, 2015

tator tots

There I was in the cafeteria eating my lunch it was a normal day until the nuclear bomb exploded no just kidding it was your typical average day.  I was just eating a lunch of tater tots and a spicy chicken sandwich.  Then all of the sudden I feel an emptiness in the food chain I look over and a tater tot had been stolen.  I had never felt a feeling like this before it was as if he just stabbed me in the back.  I must plot my revenge on him he will rue the day.  Now and forever after I will be waiting till the day he gets gator tots even if it is 40 years away until the day I will wait and plot.

school

the clock is ticking it is almost time to go to school.  7:52  I forgot to eat breakfast I eat a bowl of honey bunches of oats and it is now 7:55 almost time to go I think shirt pants check coat check socks check shoes check but wait where is my backpack a bullet upstairs like a jet that just broke moc 3 I grab rush down stairs and hurdle into the car I am readyfor school.

Wednesday, February 4, 2015

literary essay


Literary essay

 Based on Wonder by rj palico

                        


 -jlo


 The only way you can accomplish in life is to love yourself when you have love  you can do anything.some important ideas are overcoming differences and making memories. throughout the story we hear about August life and his greatest adventure yet school friendships rivalries and heart breaks this story is truly amazing even through the death of the one thing that augast thinks overlooks his face and love him.  But the truth is people love him he just needs to find out.  I think throughout the story August starts school this year. and throughout the year kids start to change there opinion about August and he also thinks about himself different I think that the important idea is you have to learn to love yourself.(6)

 

In the beginning he starts out saying " I am not a ordinary ten year old boy yes I do ordinary things like i eat ice cream i ride my bike I play catch and play my Xbox". This shows that in the beginning what he thinks of himself he refers to himself as not an ordinary boy he literally knows this because ordinary kids do not make ordinary kids run away.  This supports my claim because he has to learn to love himself this is at the begging where he hates his deformity and hates himself for having it. When I first read this i immediately knew there was something wrong with his body. and one more clue to that he does not love himself. (5)

 

Earlier in the story on page 43 he tries so hard to not get noticed and even raise his head up from his desk just so kids in his mind he thinks how can I love myself if other kids hate me call me the freak.  But the truth is for anyone to have others even like you you have to like yourself.  He does not know it but other kids do like him Christopher and summer like August and his family loves him.  He does not see it that way and so until August truly knows they love him he will never be able to love himself.  This was starting to happen but then a  huge set back  emerged jack will said in front of august that he did not like august in fact said "if i looked like that I would kill myself "this made august not just not love himself but at this point he hates himself. (5)

 

On page 165 to 167 August and jack are most likely texting and because friends over jack punching Julian.  Jack did not mean what he said he did not realize that when he said it but he realized after.  This skyrockets August feelings and at this point he lies himself but Julian had turn the whole 6 grade boys against him so they all hated him.  For a normal kid I would think it was terrible but to August having one true friend is amazing.  The part that I really think August learned to love  himself was the nature retreat as he was getting bullied Amos miles and Henry came out and helped him they had everybody forget about the war.  And the day August went to school without anyone snickering at him he realized that people loved him. an example of this is at the end his mom says “you really are wonder Auggie you are wonder” this shows they loved him and he loved them back finally August learned to love himself. (6)

can not look at him. (5)

 

My conclusion is when I think of myself in real life I could never overcame what agust did. It is amazing what aguast can overcome with the power of one persons love people can do anything. Aguast overcame his differences  toke insults from bullies a whole grade hating him. He went through all of this just to find out something he already knew .he realizes he is loved and he thinks of himself as wonder. (5)